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The thought of her father ever finding out what horrible act she had committed haunted Lucy, because she knew that she was sure to be in the deep with this news, the already torn and shredded relationship with her father was now worse, there is not going to be forgiveness today, tomorrow or in a thousand years, this act of betrayal was unforgivable... or so she had thought.
Lucy's heart was racing as her driver pulled up in front of the 100 year old castle that her father lived in along with her brother, sister and mother, it was time for the weekly family dinner the time that was thoroughly regretted, this week most of all, as she had to break the news to her father as Michel sit at home wondering what was going to happen next.
Her disappointed father opened the giant wooden paint-chipped door, the look on his face was the look of frustration and his eyes looked deep into his firstborn Childs soul searching a for a reaction, before even greeting his daughter his walked off down the hall as the sound of his boots echoed through the house. Petrified Lucy stood there unable to move, this is not the day she wanted to break the news to her family especially her father, today was not a good day.
Lucy turned around and closed the doors to keep the cold winter day out, it was emotionally cold enough in this house, she thought as she turned back around to walk there was a bang and she could hear her siblings scream in terror of what was before them, Lucy was close to the door and all she wanted to do was run away not tell anyone anything, but was that what she should do, Lucy thought, is it worth running away band leaving my family for nothing.
Lucy took a few steps forward down the long hall way thinking about all of the horrible things her father is going to do, death...torture ...pain...yelling...screaming. But as her thoughts took over her mind Lucy maybe had a little bit of faith and thought maybe it won't be so bad, but her dad wasn't in a good mood so maybe if she only told her mother and she told her father at a good time maybe just maybe that would work, but maybe not.
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