Secret Admirer!!!!!

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Jamming room:
All were congratulating nd praising Manik for his song......
Cabir our MaNan's cupid how can he even leave a chance that can make them conservative.....Nd asked Nandini about Manik's performance she was about to speak out by this time stars were not on Manik's side so Nandini's driver came nd handed over her few things which made all confused along with Nandini.....
Nandini:Robin ye sabh Kya hai????
Robin:Patha nehi Dhi ek courier service admi aya aur ye Bhola ki unko bhejdo aur main lekar agaya!!!!!
Nandini takes the flower bouquet nd the box nd asks him to leave.....
Mukthi:Choti I think this is done by ur brothers to make yew feel surprise....
Nd all there laugh nd she finds a note in the bouquet.....

Nd all there laugh nd she finds a note in the bouquet

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The note goes like this

Nandini:Secret admirer!!!!Alia:Wow!!!!!That's so cool to hearMukthi:Paar choti toh idar kisiko nehi Patha hai toh koyn ho saktha haiDhruv:Yeah I agree with Mukthi Cabir:Arey it's just some random thing waise bhi intha cutie sa gal ko kisi bhi ban ...

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Nandini:Secret admirer!!!!
Alia:Wow!!!!!That's so cool to hear
Mukthi:Paar choti toh idar kisiko nehi Patha hai toh koyn ho saktha hai
Dhruv:Yeah I agree with Mukthi
Cabir:Arey it's just some random thing waise bhi intha cutie sa gal ko kisi bhi ban saktha hai secret admirer (he says all this by pulling her cheeks)Hai na Manik!!!!
Manik:Ha....Ya whatever!!!!Nd he concentrates on his phone!!!!
Cabir:Waise I saw a box open it na let's see what ur Secret Admirer has bought yew!!!!(He stresses the word secret admirer....Which was getting irritated)
Mean while Nandu was opening the like a 2yrs old child nd all were awwwed by her antics nd how can Manik miss the great opportunity to see her like that he was just admiring the innocent beauty......

Which was getting irritated)Mean while Nandu was opening the like a 2yrs old child nd all were awwwed by her antics nd how can Manik miss the great opportunity to see her like that he was just admiring the innocent beauty

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She opens the box nd sees the gift

It was beautiful metallic bracelet with love symbols engraved on it

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It was beautiful metallic bracelet with love symbols engraved on it.....It just seemed as if it was made for only!!!!
Alia:Wow!!!!Splendid it's too good just put it on na!!!!
She nods in a yes nd wears nd she was shocked to see how perfect it was on her hand....
Mukthi:Choti this is too good just like ki someone has ordered nd made it for yew.....
Manik made a disgusted face nd acted as if he was not interested in their talks....But who knows his ears are all over their conversation!!!!Nd how can this be gone unnoticed by Cabir!!!!!!
Cabir:Arey wah dekavo na mujhe bhi!!!!Aha lagtha hai koyi tumhe bahuth close se observe kar rahe hai islei ithne beautiful sa bracelet select kar sakthe hai!!!!Yew are very lucky to have such a person as secret admirer hai na Manik Baba!!!!
Manik gives a deadly glare to her nd excuses himself from there by saying he got a call from his mom!!!!
Outside the room:
Manik POV:
Manik was restlessly moving to nd fro in the corridor.The frowns on his forehead are clearly saying that something is bothering him to the core!!!!
Manik:How!!!!Like srsly how can she accept something given by unknown so easily nd she was very Happie instead of being angry!!!!
(Guys it's just the fight b/w his heart nd mind)
Heart:I think yew must ask her this question
Mind:Have yew gone mad on what basis will yew ask her
Heart:Oye hello Mr.top floor she is my sister's friend I can ask her
Mind:But not ur frnd just think properly yew are out of the round
Heart:Manik yew just listen to me nd follow me yew will win
Mind:Manik if yew listen to that blood pumping machine na yew will loose this close friendship with her also.
Heart:Oye who is a machine ha????Yew are a machine an old modeled machine
Mind:How dare yew call me like that
Manik:enough of yew guys now I will handle this situation!!!Arey m worried here nd yew are making me loose my control on my emotions!!!!
Before his heart nd mind could speak out FAB4 along with Nandini came out....
Cabir:Manik Baba Kya chal raha hai????
Manik:Arey Cabir tumko nehi patha hai Kya India main fogg chal raha hai!!!!Nd he smirked
Except Cabir all were laughing at Manik's prank!!!!
Mukthi:Acha okay leave it yew said that mom called yew is everything okay!!!!
Manik:Haan choti!!!!Mom ne islei call Kiya kyunki she wanted to just make a reminder that day after tomorrow is the 1st day of college so we have to give a performance....
Alia:Oh shit I toh forgot about it!!!!We have not decided what to wear!!!!
Cabir:Arey makeup ke dabbe chup here we have not even decided the song yew are talking about the shopping!!!!
Alia glared at Cabir nd bet him on his head!!!!Nd this lead to the Tom&Jerry war!!!!
Mukthi:Guys enough let's decide the song first!!!!
All were engrossed in their thoughts then only they were distributed by a sweet voice.....
Nandini:Guys I have an idea!!!!
Cabir:Pls go ahead!!!!
Nandini:As it is the 1st day performance y can't yew guys sing a song on friendship!!!!
Without any caution Muklya hugged her tightly.....
Alia while broking hug:Babes yew are a savior!!!!
Mukthi:Choti the idea is too good par konsi song????
Nandini:Woh song hai na jo aap log gayi on that day!!!!Yaaro?????
Cabir:Behnaaaa TQ TQ TQ so much!!!!
Nandini:Guys I need a favor from yew ppl!!!!
Cabir: What's that Behnaaaa anything for yew!!!!
Nandini:No one will say about this secret admirer thing to my so called "Possessive Brothers"
Promise nd she forwards her Nandini....
Manik was the 1st person to promise her next Mukthi nd Alia,Dhruv nd Cabir!!!!
Nandini:Nandu promise hai na????
All laughs to her childish antics nd nods as a yes!!!!
All leaves the chain but Manik still holds her hand nd both share a cute eyelock nd there comes the MaNan BGM.......
Scene freezes on MaNan smiling cute faces!!!!












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With loads of love,
DeepthiSharma

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