As an young girl in a girl's home, you often wonder about who your parents are. Raven is no different. She wonder who they are and why they abandoned her. Little does she know, her best friend holds the answers...and her own secret...
What happened...
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This is Raven: main character/scout uniform
*Raven*
There's screaming everywhere. I don't hear it though. All of a sudden the world around me stills. There, under the great oak, stands a hooded figure. The figure starts moving towards me, it reaches out and... "RAVEN!! ARE YOU FUCKING DEAD?? WAKE THE FUCK UP!!" Someone pulls me from my dream? nightmare? whatever it was. Without thinking, I pull my hand back, and swing my fist at the person, hitting them square in the nose. My best friend, Zaylee, stands beside my cot holding her very much broken and bleeding nose. Shit. Now I've done it. "I am so sorry Zay. You startled me. I wasn't thinking" I whisper "Mrs Potts is gonna murder me when she sees".
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