Circle of Writers Critics

Critic Neila

Critic Neila [framedbyghosts]

About her

She loves to read and write, and has been doing so since she was 8-10. (She's 22 now.) She loves to help others, is a huge fan of her puppy, and likes to spend her time in nature- it's a great place to write. When critiquing, she does have a slight tendency to look for mistakes, but that is only because she is pretty strict with her own writing. She just wants to help others in any way possible because there is always room for improvement. 

Genres she will critique

All

What she looks at when critiquing

Any of the following: 

Book covers, titles, descriptions, synopsis, characters, character relationships, story/plot, character development, story/plot development, setting/imagery, use of all 5 senses, grammar, your all-around writing skills, etc.

Experience as a critic

None professionally. 

Payment

A follow or at least 3 sentences of honest comments on at least 3 chapters of her book, 'The Last Word?'

Additional details

- Will work with at most 5 clients at a time

- Will review 4 chapters at a given time

- She will be critiquing Eroticas or Mature (R-rated) stories

- She is willing to work with clients through email

"When critiquing, I do have a slight tendency to look for mistakes, but that is only because I'm pretty strict with my own writing. I just want to help others in any way possible causes there's always room for improvement."

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