Double Life

Intro part 2

  When the bus got to my stop I walked to my front door and unlocked it. I came in to see my mom showing a fake smile like something was wrong.
  "Hi sweetheart, how was school?" My mom asked clearly scared about some thing. And I needed to know what it was.
  "Mom, is everything ok?" I asked. I was really concerned because I had never seen her this scared before.
  " Yeah, everything is fine. Why?"
  " Because the last time you put on that fake smile my goldfish died. But this time you look way more scared."
  "Ella, how about you go to your room, do your homework, read, and I'll bring your dinner up. Ok?"
  " Ok" I responded but it came out sounding more like a question. I decided to do what she said because whatever this was I knew it was serious.

  Later that night after dinner I was reading when I heard my mom lightly knocking on the door.
  "Ella, can I come in? This is important"
  "Sure"
  She came in slowly, hesitant on weather she should turn back and say it was nothing, or continue.
  "Sasha told me that something happened on the bus today." My mom shakily said as she closed the door.
  "Really, because she wouldn't tell any of us what happened, all I know is she stopped unexpectedly and got out of the bus. Once she got back she wouldn't tell any of us what happened."

  Back with me in real time , I can't really remember the rest, but I can tell you what I know.
  The world of Sharnatia ( sh-ARE-neigh-sha) is a world where the are three sides:The fighters, the rouges, and the unknowns. There used to be peace in our world but over time one community turned into these three sides.
  The fighters are the ones that keep the evils under control without hurting them. They are what most people call the good side. Their main goal is peace.
  The Rouge they turned on their community when they decided that there was more than a town of equal poeple. They are what most people would call bad. Their main goal is power.
  The Unknowns were for after both of the other sides were formed. Nobody knows what they are planning, but nobody cares to find out either. Their main goal is unknown.
  As for me, I am an unknown. Now I could tell you our plan and purpose now but that would be no fun. So, how about I tell you more about our world.
  We still live on planet earth with the mortals(normal humans), but we see and do things they can't. We can do what mortals would call magic. But we don't use it in our everyday lives. Once we use all of our magic we turn to mortals, and forget all about Sharnatia. Now I can't go on forever so continue reading to see how things go.

So what did you think good, bad, ok?
Lemme know bye!