I am French and it is only two years that I learn English, I would like your opinion, and especially if what I write is right!
I was looking the landscape with my wife Melody, in the hot air balloon when suddenly we crashed into the mountain top. We are scared and terrified. The hot air balloon plunged at full speed into the ocean. I told my wife that I loved her and suddenly a flash...
I woke up on a beach of a desert island, in the where about The Red Sea. I did not see Melody so I screaming her name, without answer...
I felt depressed and terrified of being alone in this place not very rassuring.
It began to rain, so I built a solid shelter with wood that I had see earlier. I slept in my hut whose the ground was hard.
After having passed a very bad night, I made a fire because i had cold. The wind was blowing hard and I was constantly thinking about Melody. Where was she ? Was she still alive ?
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Shipwreck
AdventureI was wash up on a desert island, Where was Melody ? (my wife) Was she still alive ? PS: I am French and it is only two years that I learn English, I would like your opinion, and especially if what I write is right!
