Bully or Lover

KIDNAPPED!

Hi guys sorry I was sick still am but I need to get this out and I would like it if you guys would you know comment on this so I know what you guys like don't like or what you want me to change so here we are.

After dinner we decided to go on a walk. The night sky was just gorgeous and I loved every second of it, then he stopped suddenly and gasped."Listen Sennamon...I,I'm sorry but... I can't be with you." He paused I gave him a confused frown and he continued." I sold you so I could pay my debt." Then I heard chuckling and footsteps and then everything went black, but before I completely passed out I heard two things."I'm sorry." And then a loud 'bang'
To be continued...