~Revising and Editing~

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*Warning~Death*
First Draft
Zane woke up in a bed of flowers. He didn't want this! Why was he awake? He walked through the tunnels he was in, what was this place? It was nice though, almost calming. The walls were a light shade of purple-weird but soothing. "Little boy? Are you lost? My, you're injured!", A females voice called out. Zane hadn't noticed, but he was bleeding from large, deep cuts. A beautiful lady with Galaxy like wings approached Zane. She carefully looked at the wounds, Zane taking a step back in fear. What was she? It? "Oh excuse my rudeness, my name is Celeste. I'm the Guardian of the ruins. My boy, you're very hurt, let me guide you to my home. I can patch you up and make you something to eat", the winged blue-haired girl spoke. Zane hesitantly nodded earning a smile from the creature.

"Why can't you just fly me back up? Why must I take a journey to return to the surface?",  Zane asked as he approached the door leading farther into the caverns. He wanted to leave. "My old friend-now king- trapped and sealed many creatures and beings such as myself down here. I can't leave. I can not even leave the ruins, after I declined a proposition he made", Celeste explained holding Zane's shoulder lightly. "Thank you miss, for saving Me,and giving me food", Zane mumbled starting to push the door. "Wait! Before you go take this", she interrupted him placing a dull blade into his pale hands, "There are monsters out there who truly live up to their title.  please, stay safe". She hugged him (teary eyed) before letting him continue on.

On his journey to the King's Palace, he met an extremely odd group of beings he befriended. A werewolf named Gene, a brother and sister witch who would not stop arguing, a nerdy blue earred neko, a village of blue furred dogs, a charming centaur with brown hair, and two loyal guards of the king-brothers too. Although he didn't want to, he had slain a few monsters who he crossed paths with. Bloodthirsty monsters.

He now stood behind the throne chair, it not facing the entrance. He heard deep laughter coming from the throne. "So you are the boy who's been making everyone of my best guards go against me", A deep voice said.

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Second Draft
He gripped the blade handle tightly. A huge, demented smile plastered on his face. A rainbow of Reds and even some black lingered on the blade he was given.
First was the caring Angel Celeste. She wasn't hard to get rid of. She refused to hurt him, even hate him after he stabbed her to death. She blamed herself-not being able to help the poor innocent boy.
Then came the two witches. A bickering sister and an annoying brother. The look on the males face when I ganked his sister was priceless. He may not have shown it, but he did love her. He was hard to fight-way tougher than the girl. But he didn't stand a chance.

Next, came the overrated head guard werewolf. God, he was extremely full of himself. Although he was stronger than the other worthless trash he'd beaten, it wasn't very difficult to stab him in his heart.

Again, he went after a group of 2. A blue cat girl and her best friend which was a white haired angel. The angel wasn't hard to kill. He put Zane through a number of obstacles. Seeming pointless at the time, he pushed on, finally killing the kind-hearted angel. Little did he know, the angel was buying time for the girls escape. The one that got away.
Finally, he destroyed two very close guards. Unrelated, they still were nearly like brothers. After he had slit the brown haired boy's throat, the older blonde one just surrendered. Easy kill.

Now he stood in the kingdoms thrown room expecting the big man himself. He however was surprised when he say the girl. The one smart enough to stay away but stupid enough to come back. "Even though I have my undying hatred for King Aaron, I warned him. He's gone now. Hiding-making sure you can't leave this realm and hurt any other one", the neko explained, not hesitating as she said anything. She pulled a hidden blade out from and boots and held it towards the mass murderer her front of her. "You. You're going to beat me?", Zane cackled, "After I've slaughtered a werewolf, whatever those guards were, witches, angels-one which was yours-, and countless other monsters?" "Go ahead, make a move", She threatened, not moving a muscle. Zane rushed forward, stabbing her in the throat. She didn't disappear like the other kills though, she still stood, no blood spilling. "I'm sorry kid, but the only way you could've killed this demon was with kindness. But its to late for that now isn't it", she spoke. Her eyes turned black and she pulled out Zane's blade. "I wish I didn't have to do this, but you left me no chose"
Zane fell to the floor. Blood pouring from the new wound in his stomach. He was dying by his own blade.
"I'm sorry it ended Like this...maybe we could've been friends...if you hadn't choose Genoside", was what he heard before nothingness.
Saved 12:34 pm.

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Y/n is kinda mad huh? She was going to make Zane kinder, only hurting when nessisary, but that changed huh?  I wonder what'll patch things up between the 2. I mean, I kind of know, but I kinda need to lol. Also, sorry for slow updates. I'm a tired piece of sh*t with little motivation to do almost everything.

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