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The Criminal's Game

Title: The Criminal's Game
Author: AinFaiz
Genre: Mystery/Thriller

So, this is not the kind of genre I usually read but I really enjoyed it. First of all, I would like to talk about the description, what I can say about it is that it caught my attention specially the line that said "a game that shouldn't be played by children nor adults, but detectives." It really just grabbed my attention so great job for making me feel excited to read your story. And then your writing, I love how you described the actions they were doing and the dialogues. However, I find a few dialogues a bit too long so I suggest to break it into parts and you had some long paragraphs that could be break down as well. It kinda gets boring and hard to read because of the long dialogues and paragraphs so you might as well edit it. Overall, I like your story and the plot is really unique and cool.

I believe you said it's your first book, some piece of an advice from me just keep on writing and don't really think about the mistakes you make or will make. Just write and write and once you're done with the book you edit.

Rating: ❤❤❤❤