The Forbidden Slytherin

Part 1

Hi this is Pumpkin and I just want you all to know that this is my first fanficton ever. James and Lilly are alive, the babysitter scampered out of the way and is a pureblood so Voldmort didn't kill her. And just so you know this chapter is written in past tense and you will see why at the end.

"up up up, get out of bed" my dad yelled.

At the first up, I was out of bed and straightening my long blond hair and did a charm on it that my mom taught me to do, for the next 24 hours it will style into whatever I want it to be. Then I went into my bathroom to put on pink lipstick and nude eye shadow that has a glitter accent. Then I put on my favorite red dress that looked like flames, black leggings, and gold flats. As I was leaving my room I grabbed my red and gold book bag, all my clothes are perfect for Gryffindor. But my mom put a charm on them so they would change color if I go to Ravenclaw or Huffelpuff which may happen. When I got downstairs, mom yelled for everyone to line up next to the fireplace. We will be taking the flew to the wizard retreat which is across the street from Kings Cross Station. Since I was the oldest by 10 months I went first holding my little sister Kayla, who's 10, in one hand and my little brother Maxwell, who's 6, in the other hand.

Once we got to platform 9 3/4 we all bid our goodbyes; and Harry and I got on the train and sat together. The ride flew by, I fell asleep after 10 minutes.

When we got to Hogsmead station a big fat ugly guy called all the first years over. Since we were going in boats I got stuck with a bushy haired girl who kept rambling facts about nothing that made any sense whatsoever.

After a hat sang a song it was time to be sorted. Since I was the oldest my name got called first. (Now is when to listen to the song) The hat took a while to think but the last thing I remember is it yelling Slytherin before the world goes black.

Please comment and now you know why its in past tense. I hope you like it and please give me constrictive criticism. All the credit for the song goes to Not Literally Productions. Thanks again, Pumpkin