I really like the book: Reputation by innerbeautea. So, add a bit more detail.
Also, don't introduce the characters so fast. Take your time. Advertise your book alot.
One more thing, I give it ★★★✹ stars.
Oh ya, I forgot. Use more periods, you know? Don't have too long sentences. Just, don't make 'em too short or too long. Right in-between.
Devin has left the building.
YOU ARE READING
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