Me and my older brothers ? X

Evie lou !!!!!

Nathan's POV

"So this girl is hot yeah ?" I ask Siva.

"Yes she is " he said plainly.

"Your not exited about it ?" I asked again.

"You twat cause I am !!!!" He shouted jumping up and down. God he isn't getting this girl she's mine !!!

Just then there was a knock at the door. We both rushed to answer it but Max was already there. " I'll get this " he said with a cheeky smirk on he play boy face.

So basically max is the player and will get any girl.

Nathan # me is the good looking one obviously

Siva is the one with the good killing skills

Tom is the fit one and always gets the girls

And then there's jay he's the gentle man when it comes to girls x but then when it comes to fighting he's amazing !!!

Evie's POV

OMG he is fit !!! I need to find out his name. He has a friend called Harry that's all I know :)

" Hi ?" I said.

" Hello " he said back.

" Hi what's your name ?" I asked.

" Nathan , yours ?" he asked.

OMG Nathan what a perfect name for a perfect boy.

" I know I'm perfect !" he said.

" Aha " I said. Wait what ???? rewind.

" I know I'm perfect ??" what ??

I'm Evie Lou. And what did you just say ? I asked my self.

Can he read my mind. No stop. He can't that's not possible.

" It is possible ?!" he whispered in my ear.

"What are you?" I asked.

"I a - " he said but the got cut off.

" Hi Evie Lou ?!" said a boy with curly hair.

" Hi what's you name ?" I asked then I saw something. Some thing shadow like. Black behind him.

" Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhh i!!!!! " I screamed. Nathan saw it too " moooovvvveeee it's Shoduojk !" he shouted as he pushed me out of the way ?????

Hiiiii !!!!!

So who likes the story????

Who do you think Shoduojk is ????????????????? I'm having fun writing this story. I hope you all like it and comment and vote too. I really want to be friends with everyone on here. So shoutout too @Katie Boo. She's a great writer and I've known her since I was about 4 x she's amazayn. Soooo carry on reading love you alllllll byeeeeee !!!!!!!!!