ok so these are all poems that i have come up with so it would be fantastic if you could let me know what you think
VOTE...COMMENT...FAN please thankyou
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The withering rose
An old rose withers.
As a new one lives.
Just one of the prossesses in the life i live.
So the question i ask for you is...
which rose are you?
the old or the new?
so you better make your choice now.
before its to late.
and you are left behind.
bcm
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Breaking
you can hear the crys
you canb see the pain
and yet all you do is laugh in my face
why cant you help me?
why cant you stop?
i need you back
for my heart breaking to stop.
bcm
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The cold seeps in
as the warm leaks out
The darkness fills my mind
all becasue you left me behind
this makes no since
this makes me cry
all because im alone inside
no where ti turn
no where to hide
so here i sit terrified
bcm
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ok guys let me know what you think i will be trying to put more up as soon as i can
