*WARNING* strong language
Since I absolutely love judging people, I decided to pass judgment onto some horrible mary-sues and Gary-stues on the internet. Most of these I just found surfing but submissions are welcome! I know this is not an original...
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Can we just talk about the appearance a little bit? First off, the boobs. Did you just use circle tool and said 'Screw it' ? I don't think boobs, OR the clothes around them work like that. Second off, They didn't have hair dye back in Victorian England. Lastly, you can't just throw a corset on a dress and call it Victorian....
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Full name: Janne Noemi Archuletta
Name meaning: Janne - God is gracious Noemi - Pleasant
Alias: Janne (Jane)
Nickname: Tenshi
Age: 13
SHE'S 13?! WITH THOSE CIRCLE TOOL BOOBS?!!
Height: 150 cm (Black Butler I)
Weight: 36 kg (Black Buter I)
Ok, the average weight for a girl 150 cm tall is 45 kg. Your character is underweight.
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Looks:
Hair - Curly, kneelong, dark brown, silky, smooth and soft.
That hair must be PAINFUL to manage. I have curly hair and I cant even manage it in a bun.
Eyes - Big, pretty, blue orbs with a rare shade of turquise containing a calm, soft and warm gaze.
"Orbs..." *eyeroll* Why does every mary-sue have to have 'unique' eyes? At the very least give them a reason to be unique.
Skin - Soft, silky, pure and flawless porcelain skin.
Ok, I doubt a pubescent teenage girl in an era before acne cream would have a complexion that perfect.
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