Umbridge_BurnToDeath : how do you make your story descriptions more interesting?
Answer: What I do is I put a small description of the main character and her/his every day life then what changed their schedule of their everyday life and then I put a short sneek peek of the first chapter. AND DON'T FORGET DETAILS!! For example:
Teenage girl, Beth, was home schooled. She had no friends. Every day was the same; wake up, eat, school, read, lunch, school, supper, go to the store, and finally sleep. Until one day she bumped into a boy on her way to the store. They talked and eventually became friends. Who was this boy? What was his name? Why did he want to be her friend? Why didn't he just walk away? Read to find out more.
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RandomHow this works is you ask for my advice and I will answer it as best I can. So what I mean is ask me advice in general. Or advice on how to start or finish your book. Or what your next chapter should be. I'm very descriptive and I don't need a shout...
