The Man In The Shadows.

This is my first book! It may be scary for some readers. (Cation. May have language, and sexual content.)

"Raylin, I don't think we should be out here. I'm scared, and it's dark. And I can't see a thing." Jackie says, while trying to move branches away from her face, and trying to keep up with me.

"Jackie come on, keep up." I say.

"Ray, please can we just go back. I don't like this!" Jackie says. I stop dead in my tracks, and turn around. I put my hands on Jackie shoulders and look her straight in the eyes. "Jackie.. Would I ever put you though something, where I knew you could get hurt?" She looks away, takes a deep breath, and says.. "No, you wouldn't."

"Well okay then. Now loosen up. Were almost to the boys house." I say.

"Raylin, have you ever met these boys before?" She says still moving branches away from her face. "No, but there hot" I say with a big grin on my face. "RAYLIN" Jackie says in very loud voice, so loud I jumped. "Yes?" I say.

"Ugh, I can't believe you. You don't know anything about these boys." Jackie says. "Well, that's why we are going to see them, to find things out about them." I say. "But-" Jackie says then I interrupted her. "Ahh, here we are! It should be that house right across the street."

"Ray, I have a bad feeling about this." Jackie says. "Jackie, stop being such a wuss. You'll be fine!" I exclaim.

So we walk up to the house, walk up the stairs to the door. "Huh, why are all the lights--... " Before I could finish my sentence, I feel a large hand wrap around my neck, and I hear, the most scariest deep voice I have ever in my life heard, whisper in my ear. "Make a sound, and I swear to god. I'll kill you right here." Tears are now rolling down my face. "Where is-.." I say, wondering where Jackie is at, then I hear the voice again. "Shut up, you stupid bitch. Your friend is in the trunk. You both better stay quiet"

(This is just a draft! Might make some changes)