June 5, 1901
A couple enters a mansion that is to be there home. Only what they don't realize is that it is o house of many who dare to enter the house, unable to ever leave the house. Just like those before them this couple to falls victim to the house.
Present day
3 young ladies and a young man enter the mansion with the promise that if they can survive 2 nights and 2 days without leaving the mansion, they could own the mansion outright. Little do they know that the mansion is possessed by evil spirits.
"What do you think of this place Susa" Geridene asked. "Its creepy, is there any electricity?" "There must be if they said we could own it if we complete the 2 days and nights." June replied "Hang on, I'll go see if I can go find the circuit breaker" as Hank heads down to the basement and the lights turn on. "
"Wow, way to go Hank" says Geridene and Susa together as they giggle. "Why is it taking him so long to come back up from the basement?" asked June. Geridene steps to the edge of the staircase and yells down "HANK?" June and Susa join her as they yell down the stairs again "HANK? HANK?"
Hank finally ascends from the basement " I'm OK girls, other than being a slight bit more deaf from you screaming my name, lets go explore the house a little bit, OK?
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