Male! characters x Male OC

(Link x male! neko! oc) the god and the skychild

So I'm still new at the whole writing thing, but I'm an aspiring writer so yeh. Positive criticism is greatly appreciated. Also, I found a sexy link for you (get it? Link, like the internet? No? OK I'll stop ;v;) you're welcome mah churrens. •v•
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It took a while, but he finally did it. Link stood before two large doors with strange markings all over the handles. "Must be a seal of some sort." He thought.
Minutes passed before he figured out how to break it, and pushed on the heavy doors. The skychild was met with lush green grass growing on the floor, with the occasional speckle of flowers hear and there. The walls were green with yellow stripes and had flowery vines growing all over them. In the center of the room, laid a green and gold canopy bed with the curtains drawn closed keeping him from seeing who was inside. "Hello? Is anyone hear?" When no one answered, link cautiously moved towards the bed and gently pushed back the curtains. Soundly sleeping inside the bed was what seemed like a girl. She had soft porcelain skin, beautiful golden shoulder length hair that faided to green at the ends, and a dark green and golden kimono. The strangest thing about this beautiful creature however, were the fuzzy cat ears sprouting from the head, and a tail that also faided to green at the tip. Link hadn't noticed until now but the girl seemed to be holding a flower made of gold, and when he picked it up it dissolved completely. A soft groan was heard as the girl began to awaken. "Well it's about damn ti-" the girl's eyes fluttered open as she sat up. Link was at a loss for words. Her right eye was an ocean blue with a small green patch in the corner, and her left eye was a light grassy green that faided to gold around the iris. The hero was absolutely captivated by the girl's unique eye color. "Oh, hello. Sorry for my rudeness, I was expecting someone else." The girl's voice was smooth and, strangely enough, more than a little masculine. "N-no worries. I'm link." The skychild said, finally finding his voice. "Hmm. Well, my name is mimizu. I am a god of nature and-" "Wait, what? Did you say "god" ? Like as in, male?" The small god gave an annoyed expression and sighed. "Yes as in male. Why does everyone always think I'm a girl?!" Mimizu said, mumbling the last part. "Well anyway, thank you for freeing me. I don't really have anything to give you in return.... except, my body of course." Link's face turned bright red as mimizu spread his slender legs, making his kimono open and reveal his bare upper thigh. "I-im not gay." Link said, looking away. Mimizu smirked. "That's not what your friend there is telling me." Link attempted to use his shield to cover his crotch, immediately knowing what the god was hinting. "It's no use in hiding it. It's only going to get worse." Link shifted uncomfortably as mimizu got up and stood before him. "Oh come now, think of it as a greatful creature thanking a hero for his immense kindness." The god licked the shell of the skychild's pointed ear. Shuddering, link gave in. "I... I guess it wouldn't hurt if it was just this once." Mimizu smiled and pushed link to a sitting position on the bed. "Won't be needing these." Mimizu said, snapping his fingers making link's sword, shield, and hat disappear and then reappear again in a forgotten corner. Straddling link now, mimizu slowly leaned in and pressed his soft pink lips against link's lightly chapped ones. Link felt sharp teeth lightly nibble at his bottom lip, and hesitantly opened his mouth. Mimizu giggled when their teeth clacked together. "What's so funny?" Link asked,pulling apart. "I can tell you're new to all this. It's cute." mimizu smiled at link's pouty face. "I'll show you new." He grumbled as he began littering the small god's neck with kisses, licks, and bites. Mimizu let out a surprised moan and tangled his hands in link's long blond tresses. Link left small purple marks that faided away as quickly as he left them as he traveled lower, until he undid mimizu's sash, and began sucking on the small blonde's rosey buds. "A-ah! Link~" Said blonde smirked against mimizu's skin as one hand and traveled to mimizu's thigh and began massaging it, and the other played with his other bud. The small necko Grinded his hips against link, making their erections rub against each other. "Link~ I want moooore!" Mimizu whined, desperately trying to get some friction between the two. Link growled as he pushed mimizu on the bed, now noticing the small male had not been wearing any underwear. "You're not wearing underwear. Were you expecting this?" Mimizu panted and tilted his head. "H-huh? What are 'underwear'?" Link stared at mimizu for a moment, then shook his head. "Never mind." with one swift movement, Mimizu pushed link on his back and quickly ripped off Link's shirt with his sharp claws. "Hey-!" "Don't worry, I'll replace it later." Mimizu said, now marveling at Link's well built body as he ran his hands up and down his torso, while traveling lower and lower. Ever so slowly, the small blonde pulled Link's pants down with his teeth, looking him in the eye. "S-stop teasing me and just do it!" (A wild shilebuff appears. Jk) smirking, mimizu pulled his pants and boxers down the rest of the way, letting his manhood spring up like a jack-in-the-box. "Wow. That is just... OK then." The damn thing was huge! For a moment mimizu contemplated as to how he was to get this to fit in his mouth, then gave a small shrug and began licking and sucking the tip before engulfing the rest of his manhood as he reached a hand back to finger himself. Mimi's moans sent vibrations up and down Link's cock as he added another finger to his hole, stretching himself out. Much to Link's frustration, mimizu stopped before he could cum, turned around, and positioned his hole above the hero's twitching cock. "Wouldn't want you to finish before the main event, would we?" Ever so slowly, the small God lowered himself sighing at how full he now was. Link was mesmerized by the tree of Life tattoo the older male had on his back, lightly tracing it as mimizu adjusted to his size. After a moment or two mimizu began slowly bouncing on the skychild's length, moaning his name over and over again. "Link~ oh link, you feel so good inside me~ ohh fuck me link~" (Jesus Christ on a bike I can't stop blushing >\\\\<) It was then that link lost all self control. The hero quickly sat up, lifted one of mimizu's legs, and began fucking him fast and hard.
Mimizu screamed in pleasure as link repeatedly​ rammed into his prostate, and began stroking his neglected cock in time with his thrusts. It wasn't long until they began to feel a knot tangling itself in the pit of their stomachs. "Ahh~ link, I'm gonna cum!!"  The older blonde screamed. "Then cum for me kitten~" he grunted in his sensitive ears. Mimizu clung to link as best he could as he screamed in ecstasy, spilling his seed all over the sheets and Link's hand. And then again when link filled him up with and animalistic moan. The pair sat in their love for a moment, catching their breaths. "I have a feeling i may see you more often." Mimizu panted. "You may as well travel with me." Link said, pulling out and then falling back in exhaustion. "R-really?!" Mimizu laid next to him. "If it means getting that on the daily, hell yes!" He said in a serious tone. The small God smiled warmly, before yawning cutely. Link chuckled and pulled the blankets over them. "I guess we start in the morning." He said, kissing the top of his head before being killed to sleep by his new lover's soft purring.

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D-did I do ok? I'm still new at the whole writing thing, and I hope link wasn't ooc. This was a request from a friend of mine. Well anyway, I hope you enjoyed.
Lovely day~
~ lena