Impersonating Mr. Tomlinson (Fan Fiction Edition)

The Critique

 I stare at the crowd in awe as everyone screams their heads off. Fireworks erupt and the guys start playing some music. It feels like it's vibrating through my body.

I jump up and down, and smile at the guys of One Direction. They all stare at the screaming fans, with huge smiles on their faces. It's seriously something I'm never going to get tired of.

Their smiles.

"How's it going everybody!" I say into the mic. Everyone screams even louder and I just smile.

"This is the first show of our tour!" More screams. "And we're so excited to play our new songs for you as well as some older ones." I see Liam wink and wave at a fan in the front row.

"Well why don't we get to it Lou?" Niall asks from my right. I raise an eyebrow and smirk.

"Yeah, yeah Ni, let me finish." I joke and everyone starts screaming even louder. He puts his hands in the air in surrender, with a huge smile. I smile back and look at the crowd.

"Okay, so... ARE YOU READY!?" I yell. Everyone screams 'Yes'.

"I didn't quite hear them, did you hear them Harry?" I ask Harry, the crowd goes wild just by mentioning his name. Harry just grins, as he plays a few notes on the piano.

"No, I didn't really hear them. Did you hear them Niall?" He looks over at Niall who just shrugs.

"Nope, I think they need to be a little louder." Niall says and the crowd starts screaming even louder.

"Mmm, I don't know guys. I think we should leave." I say and they all look over at me.

"Yeah, I think so too." Liam says. The music stops.

"Oh well." Niall says as we start walking away. The crowd is screaming even louder than before, trying to get us to come back.

I'm just laughing my head off, while the team directs me under the stage, so we can pop up from under.

We stand above the closed openings on top of our heads. Excitement runs through my body. I can't wait to jump up and start the show.

The backstage crew make sure everything is ready to go.

The familiar music to One Direction's number one hit song starts. I bend my knees like we did when we practiced.

I'm not someone in the crowd. I'm the entertainer. I'm Louis Tomlinson.

I feel the sudden rush of adrenaline hit me, as the platform pushes us off from the ground and up to the stage.

We land perfectly on our feet as the crowd screams their heads off.

"When I first laid eyes on you, you turn my whole world upside down. I fell in love with the sound, my heart makes when you are around." I sing, smiling at the crowd, walking towards the fans.

"It's like a beautiful song that I wrote, that's made just for you. And when I look in your eyes, I can see you're the one. You're making me feel things inside, and I can see you're the one." I take one of their hands. A beautiful girl in the front row, who eyes are shinning brightly. "You're making me feel things inside, and I can see you as my bride?" The tempo changes for the chorus.

"There's no gravity, when you're holding me. You said I'd never fall, and now I see. Would you love me like I can? I promise I can be your man. We'll never be apart, 'cause you are the one. You're my gravity."

After performing all the songs from the set list, and goofing around on stage. The show is over. It went by so quickly. To be honest, I wish it wasn't over. I'm glad to be able to do it all over again at the next show.