Silent Screams

I know

I know these little hopes,
Will kill me one day,
I know the dreams I am having,
Are gone so far away,
I know my writing are shitty,
But you liked them any way,
I know we just met,
But I have a feeling you won't walk away!

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Hello lovely people!
How is the poem? Should I continue writing poem or not? Please tell me :)