(*BAD ENGLISH AHED*)
My friend had send me something that she wrote and she thinks that its not good and I told her that her writing is amazing but she is not beliving me..
So I askd her if she is letting me post this on Wattpad to ask you guys opinion.. sooooo.. yeah😅
She is wirting amazing in my opinion so tell me what do you guys think^-^
This is what she had sent me:
"Dear mum,
I've decided to starts writing to you, even though you're dead, because of something
I come across in the Ministry of magic... One day I'll go back into the Departmant of Mysteries and post these letters to you through the veil.
But I suppose I should tell you how i came to be there in the first place...
You may be aware I've found it rather difficulte to make friends, so I didn't start this year with many expectations.
until I met some new people...
They're rather an odd group...
perhaps that's why I like them. They do seem a bit socially awkward though. Probably Harry Potter and I have the most in common...
...we're both outcasts. We have some other things in common too.
So when he offered to teach us how to defend ourselves...
I went to every meeting. It was like having friends. As a teacher, Harry add us all quite excited. But then we had to stop practising and really do it. It's all a bit of a blur after that. I'm sorry I haven't written in such a long time. Maybe sad things make me think of you. Some horrible Death Eaters Kidnapped me at Christmas and locked me in a cellar. I think it was to punish Daddy for some things he wrote. Thankfully, an elf named Dobby rescued us all. It's so unfair that he had to die, when he was so good and brave. I expact people are used to laughing at me...
but maybe that's going to change."
(Its beasd on Harry Potter.. even tho I dont like Harry Potter so much I like what she had worte^-^)
(What do you guys think?^-^)
