Vampire in the allyway

Chapter 1

As soon as I awoke I rushed to get ready. Today was Victoria's  birthday, and she and I are going to throw an exquisite party. As soon as I am done I run out the door to the car and get it started. Today is going to be amazing I thought for  like the one billionth time. My brother gets dropped of first which made the twenty minute car  ride seem like twenty hours.

  "Dad! Can't you hurry the pace. Trying to get to school over here." I actually hadn't rushed my dad  like this in ages but it was so worth getting to see Victoria  before classes started.

    "Would you care to drive Kateleana." My dad said an annoyingly measuring tone that he loved to torture me with.

   "Yes of course father I would absolutely love to." I said in by best british accent that I could do with my sarcasm. Dad just laughed  and shook his head at what I said.

   We finely arrived and I gave dad a quick hug and sprung out the door, sprinted for my locker,and finally started to scope out the place for any signs of Victoria. Not but five minutes I caught some guy watching me which wasn't very favored by me, so I walked gracefully over to him. Not even before I stopped in front of hid did he started talking extremely fast.

     "Katerina I haven't seen the girl yet. You said that you would recognize her but you don't seem to have seen her yet either."he finally paused so I continued

       "Look here I don't know you or why you have me mixed with some one else but you have me misunderstood with some one else so stop being a creep and stop looking at me." I stop mid way through talking when I was erupted by a spontaneously large amount of laughter.

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