My Drawings

Long time no see

Ok so my OC has changed a lot now
Name: Jupiter
Age-19
Gender- Male
Backstory (yay he actually has a backstory now)- ok in the early 2000 the government wanted to see if they could hypnotize a wide range of people, they did this by broadcasting a tv show over the course of 3 months. In that time Jupiter was completely mind controlled, it came to a day that the government gave the people that where hypnotized a task so they could find them easily. Jupiters task was to burn down his house and that killed all his family, he got out with burns all the way down his left arm. When the government found all of the people that where hypnotized they weren't happy at the small number of people that the hypnosis worked on. With the number so low they decided to do experiments on the people who where hypnotized to see why they were different. So they conducted an experiment on Jupiter to see why he was so easily hypnotized, but the experiment when very wrong. So wrong that they had no other choice but to give him liquidized rock from Jupiter. They soil on Jupiter contained healing components so the government figured out a way to use that for humans.
The rock healed Jupiter instantly and he could regenerate extremely fast, but it did come with side effects. Jupiter could no longer remember his name and with the scientists not wanting him to remember his past, they gave him the name Jupiter. With Jupiter healing capability he was the main subjects for experiments, but he can't remember all of them because they used mind control to make him forget.
Jupiters hair was originally blonde, but the more experiments they did the redder his hair got.

That's all I have for his story, please inform me on how to improve him.