Tu jo mila sab mil Gaya Mere rehnuma

Prologue

Hi guys this is Anah back with with new stuff i hope u like it..Rainy season....,
Delhi...
Night....
Rain flowing...
Saint Mary Orphanage...,
All sleep peacefully...,
Suddenly one girls shouts...
Billujiiii!!!!
Mother comes...,
Mo:alya r u ok???
Al:yes mother...i am ok...
Mo:again same nightmare..
Al:haan mother...
Mo:who is Billu?!!
Al:i don't know mother...
Mo:this time is u saw his face...
Al:no mother..
Mo:no problem...that's ur past maybe u should meet him..when u find ur past....now sleep my child...
Morning...!!!
Alyaaaa!!!!!
Mother shout...!!
Al:i am coming mother....
Mo:alya u got job from Oberoi industries...,Mumbai..
Ani:Mumbai!!??..
Mo:yes...
Ani:no i can't go from here..plz mother
Mo:alya..u should move on..no one can here for always..it was great opportunity..get ready..
In Mumbai..,
Oberoi Mansion,
Dadi prays god...,
Dadi:i don't know..what bad i did.
U giving this punishment..
Pinky:aapne anika ko jeen kar humari khushi jeen liya...
Shivaay room...,
Shivaay stands in front of anika picture with gnarled...
Shi:u just leave me all alone... just take my everything with u..
Everything!!!!
He just started breaking things..
Blood started oozing shivaay hands...
Om comes...
Om:shivaay r u out of mind...
Don't behave like mad...
Shivaay hug him and cry uncontrollably...!!!
Rudr looks on...

Kindly ignore grammatical mistakes....

So guys how is it....shall i continue or not....this is new version of ishqbaaz....plz drop ur views...