Redsparrow improvement

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Purple_Cat_ , I tried making it look like she was getting older, but I'm not sure if it worked. If you have any suggestions, tell me! I want to make this the best I can :3

 If you have any suggestions, tell me! I want to make this the best I can :3

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Sorry the lighting is so bad!

Sorry the lighting is so bad!

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Actually, I added a bit more. Is this better?

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