A Visit To Peter Pan (OUAT fan fiction)

Melissa P.O.V.
I was practicing my magic by my family and friends grave after Hook and his crew had come and destroyed my land, killed my family and friends, and took all the things I had ever loved. But a shadow had came and asked that some one had wished to see me in another land. I said 'sure just let me get a few things,' he nodded and waited while I went to grab my sword, dagger my dad had given me as a little girl, my whole jar of pixie dust and my coat. I ran back to the graves and found the shadow laying in a pine tree. He had heard me and swooped down and grabbed me by the hand and we took of flying to, only he knows where.
An island was coming into view and once we got to a patch above the ground where there were no trees he dropped me 60 feet above the ground. I had come down crashing but luckily I landed on two feet. I started to brush the dirt off my clothes when I heard a sound. Something like a twig being stepped on. I put up my guard and looked around then a dark object came flying at me. I ducked and pounded, what I think was a human, to the ground and putting them out cold. I then felt a tap on my shoulder. I quickly took out my sword pushed them up against a tree and had my sword to their throught. I looked up to see that the person was. Peter Pan.
"O. You have fire. I like fire. Don't I boys?" I looked up to see a whole bunch of lost boys sourounding us. I quickly with drew my sword from Pan's neck and put it in it's holder.
"What do you want Pan?" I asked sharply.
"We'll you can start with picking up Felix and bringing him back to camp." Pointing his finger towards the boy I had just pumbled.
"Why should I do anything you say?" I asked looking him straight in the eye.
" We'll seeing that you still owe me that favor....." he replied.

*FLASH BACK*

I had been crying my eyes out for hours after Hook and his crew destroyed my land, killed my friends and family, and taken all the villages treasures.
"Why so down love?" A voice asked behind me.
"Take a look around," pointing around the village that was burnt to the ground and corpses all around the ground, " Hook destroyed the land and all the villages." Turning to face the voice behind me and look him in the eyes with my red and puffy eyes from crying.
"Aww yes Hook..." he said looking down at his shoes.
"Who are you anyways?" I asked.
"And how do you now Hook?"
"O. Did I forget to introduce myself? I'm Peter..... Peter Pan. And Hook we'll we've now each other for quite awhile." He said sternly yet with a smile on his face.
"But, I didn't come here to talk about that. I came to help you."
"Help me with what?" I asked.
"To help repair you're land isn't that what you want?"
" I DON'T WANT MY LAND TO BE FIXED!" I screamed.
"I WANT MY FAMLIY AND FRIENDS! I WANT REVENGE ON HOOK!!" I screamed till my throught hurt so badly, it felt like it was on fire.
"We'll I can't help you with that but I can fix you're land and give you crops so you won't starve to death." He answered to my screaming.
" I guess that's better then nothing." I mumbled.
" What's the price?" I asked knowing all magic comes with something in return.
"A favor. For when the time comes." He said with an devilish grin.
And with that he snapped his fingers and was gone leaving repaired land, plenty of crops to last the year.

*END OF FLASH BACK*

"Fine." I said with a annoyinsh.
With that I picked Felix up and poofed myself to Pan's camp.

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First story. so sorry for any errors. Tell me what y'all think!

~M