Snakes Of Love

1. The First Cry

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Run. Temperance. Run.

My feet repeatedly slap the ground as I run against wind. I missed my fucken alarm this morning I would just hate it if I was late to school. And I'm not a nerd, see I'm just smart and discipline nothing wrong with that. Anyway, I'm running my heart out and of coarse all I can think about is my destination. Okay turns out, running through a green light turns out not to be the safest way to go. See, in my mind I would just run across the street before any car could come but I fucken tripped. I could have gotten up but a car clearly driving over the speed limit came racing to me as fast as the speed of light. I do not know why i didn't move but my muscle just didn't move for some reason. Now my heart is beating but I felt dead, like I was already dead. The car is still coming toward me and I swear in my mind everything is going slow motion my the movies. The car is trying its best to slow down the tires are screaming on the street. The car literally stops in my face and Im stop breathing. And then start breathing heavily. Knowing the owner was gonna be ready to give me a piece of his mind I stand ready to make a run for it. The car door open, fuck, the car door open just as got up. Before he could bullcrap me about me about me road safety, picked up my bag and ran for it.

I end up in class late but safe and I'I have to say like most of the student in class I wasn't listening to what the professor was saying. I still couldn't believe I had been so stupid, I still running my heart just to make it class on time. And I know my daddy would probably kill me for killing myself. Believe me when I say he is capable of killing.

This city was ruled by the Dead Rabbits and the Serpientes de dios (Snakes of the God)  and this shit has been on since immigrants started coming to America. And yes its on of those stupid gang shit that makes no sense but I don't care because I'm leaving this god forsaken city this year. Even the high I was attending was divided by the two gangs. I honestly can't take this shit, one  of my uncles was recently killed in a drive by and all fingers point to Dead Rabbits so my dad decided to blow up a car filled a perfectly good family as revenge. That's how things goes here. That's why I'm got of here and its not like my dad is the only psychopath, the leader the our rivals Serpientes de dios. Carlos whatever his last name is, honestly the latinos really have long ass names, all I know about him is that is a brutal fuckboy. I haven't actually seen his face before but i know he is sexy because my sister describe as a sex god but tell what's new. I heard once he watched his best man dissolve in acid for betraying him. My sister actually disguise as a whore once so he could he could fuck her nut it turns out he beat the crap out of his whores when he's angry.

The only thing the class I heard from when we were dismissed us from the classroom. I walked out of class and prepared myself for long walk home. I grabbed my knee still feeling slight pain causing me to cuss under my breath. Then Joseph leaning on his car and my heart melted at the sight of him. He was absolutely beautiful, the one thing I shy away, he's so tall and muscular and sexy and such a fucken turn on. I love his light chocolate skin, I wanna worship that body. Ugh! I love him.

"Hey, Belle over here." he waved. I really wanted to run to him and throw my arms around him and kiss him like I was his girl. If I was his girl he would kiss back with so much passion and grab my ass, I would moan in his mouth an he would kiss me harder. Yeah, I'm a horny little bitch.

"Babycakes!" I jumped at his voice echoing throughout campus.

"Hold your fucken dick, I'm coming. Honestly, please don't EVER call me that again." I might love him but I don't pussy up to anyone.

I walk or rather leap to the car quickly get in the first seat and buckle myself in. I tried controlling my breathing as he got into the car. He buckled himself in and started the car.

"You know, I waited for an hour" he sighed. "How long was that fucken class?"

"Too fucken long." he chuckled at my remark glancing at me for a second before looking ahead. Ohh I want him so bad, he's so sexy and now sound like fucken high school drama queens. "Why the hell do you smell like bleach?"

"I was kind of busy this afternoon" I knew exactly he meant, he is one of daddy's assassins. I honestly wish he wasn't on daddy's side so we could leave together. I was never a family guy but I can definitely picture our beauty babies.

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The car stopped after ten minutes or so, I really lost track of time. He left the car first so he could open the door for me, blushing slightly I step out of the car and he shut the car door behind me. I run towards the house ahead of me.

"Daddy" I yell running to door. "Daddy I'm home."

Opening the door quickly and rushed myself to the kitchen knowing Nana, my personal maid, would be cooking something delicious. I bumping into the counter slighty but my mouth drops to the ground. The ground where Nana laid with blood pouring out of her neck out of the deep cut.

"DADDY!!" I running disregarding pain rushing through my body.

"DADDY!!!!"

Fastened heartbeat. Blood rushing. Face reddened. 

I wished my father had responded, I wished I hugged him and asked him how he days was.

I wished he gave me one of those goofy slaps on my cheeks and I would laugh it off.

I wish he told me to toughen up and that the would never die on me.

I wish he was sitting on his thorn smoking his cigars.

I wish his hands weren't tied to thorn.

I wish I hadn't seen him on his thorn with his throat slit.

I wish I hadn't seen my dad's dead eyes staring at me with blood still pouring down his neck telling me he was killed recently.

He was murdered.

He was slaughtered like a fucken animal, like he was nothing. At that very moment, I felt grief for a second then pure rage. Right then and there I had a new life mission.

I was going to kill Carlos whatever his fucken name is.

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