This is my first fanfic I would love feed back.
Finns POV
I see a gorgeous specimen standing by the coffee cart and think to myself wow! She's gorgeous, tall, and a brunette. I tell my friends I want to get a closer look at her! So Colin and Logan decides to come up with a plan to bump into the guy she's standing next to. "Finn!!" Yells Logan "come on man!" I run to catch up to them. As we get closer their plan goes into effect.
Rory's POV
Rory and Marty were standing by the coffee cart waiting to receive their coffee's, when 3 rich boys bump into Marty. Rory gets mad and yelled at one "watch where your going!!"
The blonde turns around and says oh sorry we didn't see you there. Wait you look familiar, I'm seeing some kind of uniform. Marty replies "I bartend for you guys" "that's right he makes a killer Martini" replies the blonde.
"I'm sorry what's your name again?" The blonde asks. "Marty" I bite back. He could tell she was getting angry so he tried to lighten the mood. "By the way my name is Logan, this here is Colin and Finn. Logan states to Rory. "Rory" was her only reply through clenched teeth. Rory was getting angrier at how they seemed to think Marty was below them. Rory didn't even notice Finn staring at her from behind Logan. "How dare you talk to Marty that way!" "What way?" Asks Logan. "Like he's beneath you!" "I'm sorry" came from the man standing behind Logan. Rory looked at Finn and she felt his eyes piercing hers. "What?" She replied like she couldn't believe he was apologizing. "I'm sorry if you think we were talking down on your friend here." He had an accent she could only presume was Australian. She turns to grab her coffee that she forgot about moments ago and headed off with Marty without even saying another word.
Finn was stunned as Rory walked away. He never had anyone walk away from him before. All he could think was he had to continue to see that girl no matter what. She was beautiful with her pale skin and bright blue eyes which reminded him of the skies in Australia. She was very feisty, but could tell she didn't like them at all. "What was her problem?" Logan asked pulling me out of my thoughts. Guys, I don't think she liked us very much. Colin had added in. "I got to see her again" was all that came out of my mouth.
