Mistakes

Chapter 1

This is my first time ever attempting to write a story.. I have lots of ideas that could potentially be good but I definitely will make mistakes.. if you see any dont be scared on commenting on it and giving me some constructive criticism so that the next chapter will be even better. Please tell me if this chapter seemed to short or if me skipping threw days isnt right.. let me know I want to make sure thattl thw writing to it is good cause the ideas I have for it are.

Kalenes POV

Kalene walked along the park path to where her and Jack's meeting place after school/before is, so that they could walk together. They have been walking together and meeting in the same spot since they were 10.

She pushes her dirty blonde hair back behind her ear as she walks holding onto her blue backpack straps. As she grew closer to the meeting spot, she seen Jack laying on the bench listening to music with his old black backpack with all if these rips and holes on the side of it, just sitting ontop of him, he had that backpack since forever.

She walks up to him and taps his shoulder lightly "hellooo" she smiles at him.

He looks up at kalene pulling his head phones out of his ear. The music was blasting so he turned it down on his phone quickly.

"Hey are you ready?" He says as he stands up swinging his back pack over one of his shoulders smiling back at her.

"Yup! Let's goo" she says to him and she slowly starts to take steps forward away from the school and the park bench, letting him gather himself before they start doing a nice walk.

He walks beside her, putting his head phones away in one if his backpack side pockets.

"So what's are plans now? We could take my dad's car out tonight and do something exciting, or just drive around"

Kalene glanced at him and shrugs "Not sure, but taking your dad's car out would be fun! I love that car"

his dad owned a nice 1967 Ford mustang, bright cherry red. It was always fun to be able to drive that around, ya sure his dad doesnt really 'let us' but I mean borrowing it why he is sleeping is fine, I mean, what he doesnt know wont kill him.

She smiles at him. They take a right turn at the corner, walking along the sidewalk of the street into a small cozy naighborhood away from the park. She held onto her backpack still just for comfort, she hated when her hands wernt holding onto something or in her pockets. Her house started coming up, she lived very close to the park, probably like a 3min walk for her but jack lived a couple blocks away.
she turned to jack.

"You will pick me up with the car later tonight right?"

Jack nods smiling "of course. 12 o'clock right?"

She nods and turns to her house running to the front door going into the house.

Jack's pov

He walks away from kalenes house, walking down the street going back go listening to his music.

He wasn't paying attention to where he was walking, as he was just looking down at his phone. He bumped into a girl and spilt her coffee everywhere.