fourtris fanfic

Tobias POV:
Cara comes up to me and she's crying. "Cara, where is Tris? I ask concerned."I'm sorry Tobias, she went instead of Caleb.The doctor's don't think she is gonna make it." "Where is she?" I ask Cara. I can't believe the love of my life may be gone. I can't believe I may never kiss her again, I may never feel the warmth of her lips on mine. "She's in surgery." After Cara replies, I feel myself getting weak, like a part of me is missing. I quickly walk away from Cara without saying goodbye. I will find Tris. I half run, half run to the hospital. When I find her room, I wait in the waiting room. I see them inject her with needles and tubes, keeping her alive and for the first time I actually cry. I can't keep my emotions in. I need her. I will stay with her until-- until death do us part. I pocket and feel the small velvet box that contains a diamond ring. I think again: I will stay with her. Until death do us part. and I continue crying.

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