Tatsuo and Ryoka both share the same views of the world: it's become an awful place polluted by horrible people. They both yearn for the days of old, where the world promised more. Tatsuo is stuck in a new body for maybe the hundredth time already, but his soul is still the determined one from years ago, the one that aimed to end the world and kill all of its people. As Ryoka and him both vow to find out more about this world, they encounter things they least expected, especially when a goddess appears, offering Tatsuo a way to reach his goal and end the world once and for all after centuries of unsuccessful attempts. The price does not always come easy though.
Now, I've never read a Cellphone Novel, but for my first one, I'm glad this one was it. I really like the literary devices incorporated in each chapter. It really feels like your reading a poem. Which, in fact, you basically are. This CPN has little to no errors and it keeps you wanting more with each interesting cliffhanger. Not to mention the MC is quite the interesting fellow. I highly recommend this.
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