Author: Piper5
I'd just like to point out, I only read the first three chapters :)
Cover 6/10
Your cover is pretty, but you should put the title of the book on it, and maybe spice it up just a bit, but not bad!
Description 10/10
Your description is perfect honestly. No complaints!!
Plot 8/10
From what I've read so far, the plot is good, just a little slow at first, but that's not a big deal at all.
Characters 9/10
Stiles is very in-character, you write him very well! Especially what he'd be like if he was bitten. Scott, on the other hand is a bit out of character not too much, but just a little. I don't know if I see him giving Stiles the bite, even if he were afraid of losing him because Scott is a very selfless person.
Grammar 9/10
I only saw a few minor errors, nothing too major. Maybe read through it again though if you wanna make sure you catch them all, or have a friend read through it.
Extra Advice/Thoughts
It's a very good fic from what I've read, you're a talented writer!
Overall 42/50 If you have any questions please ask!
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