Keep on Surviving

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Melinda didn't have an easy life growing up, and she sure as heck didn't have one now. She is living in a world full of the dead and she has seizures randomly. The only

person she has is her dog and he isn't even a person. In till she encounters a certain group with a certain crossbow wielding redneck that we all love. Will Melinda die?

Find someone worth living for? Or just keep on surviving?

Okay that's the summary I know it sucks, but please give the story a chance! Please I'm begging you! 🙏🙏

Before the story I'm just going to do a character description on my oc.

Name: Melinda (Mellie)or Mel later on in the book from daryl....maybe that is

Age: 23

Looks: Long brown hair that goes down to the middle of her back and piercing green eyes.

Life: Melinda was abused as a child, by her father, her mother watched and never did anything. In till one day her mother snapped and both she and Melinda went away

to live with her parents. Melinda 16 when they had went away and she was just starting to live her life until she got in a fatal car accident. She suffered nerve trauma

and now she has seizures and random times. Her grandparents bought her Bandit a wonderful pure breed trained German Shepherd. BAA fit was trained to not only

listen to her master but also he sensed when she was going to have a seizure and sniffed her hand and licked it.

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"Shit" A skinny malnourished girl whispered to herself as she turned around and saw that they were still limping after her.

"Come on Bandit, we can do this." She spoke to her German shepherd as she ruffled his ears to calm his growling. She looked at the

chamber of her pistol, 6 bullets and 10 of geeks. Also she wasn't a good shot, chances are that she would miss their head. The woman

kept on running as she fumbled for her knife, she stopped running and was letting the undead get stumble closer to her. They were

moving faster then usual, she and her dog were the first live people they had smelled in awhile, they were starving for their flesh.

"Okay Bandit, I need you to stay low and don't bite them, okay buddy?" She took one last look at her loveable dog, that has always been

there for her. "One,two three, let's get down to buisness." The girl spoke as she stabbed the first walker in its eye socket, blood spraying

over her already grimy clothes. Suddenly she heard voices.

"T-Dog, Glenn, and Shane lets get rid of these walkers"Shouted a male voice.

People, real live people thank god, the young woman thought, she was brought back to real again as her scraggly dog sniffed her hand

and licked it. Shit was her last thought before she passed out on ground.

"Rick! There's someone here man!" T-dog spoke as he edged closer slowly, aware of the dog. Bandit was standing guard over his

master, growling with his teeth bared at the stranger approaching his master. The sherif walked over and looked at the girl, she was

incredibly skinny, she had long brown hair laying around her shoulders.

"She bit?" Rick Grimes asked.

"As far as I can tell no, that mutt won't let us any closer" T-dog replied wiping his head over his damp forehead.

"Hey, don't worry dog. Look there is more walkers coming in and if you don't let us closer to your master we can't help her, okay?" Rick

spoke softly kneeling down to the dogs level, he didn't have to bend down much. Then sticking his hand out gingerly for the dog to

sniff. The dog stop growling and backed up a little bit, but still keeping his eyes on his master.

"That's one loyal mutt." T-dog chuckled, as he carried the girl to the R.V.

" Rick! You can't be thinking bout letting that girl join us. I mean come on, man we're already street he out for food man." Shane spoke

loudly and stern as he walked over to where the man was.

"I can't just leave a innocent girl laying out there to die, once we start doing that we lose our humanity, the last normal thing we have in

this crazy world. So yeah man I am letting her in this group. Now come on man, we have to get going those gun shots are going to be

drawing walkers from all around." Rick spoke in a condescending manner, then he went into the R.V.

The young woman's eye fumbled open after three hours of much needed sleep.

"Where am I? Who are you? Where's my dog?" The girl spoke and questions came out like water from a waterfall.

"Rick she's awake! Hey honey, I'm Carol. Everything is okay, we're not going to hurt you 'kay?" Carol spoke softly looking down at the

lady.

"Okay. Um where's my dog?" Her voice cracked every so often while she spoke, sleep evident on her voice.

"Don't worry he's one of our cars. He couldn't fit in the R.V." The middle aged woman chuckled.

"What's your name? How old are you?" A new voice spoke this time.

"I'm Melinda, I reckon I'm 23 now." Melinda spoke as she sat herself up.

"Do you know what happened out there?" Rick asked concern evident in his face.

"Must'a just passed out from exhaustion. Been a'while since I slept, being alone and all, also probably didn't help that I haven't ate in

a'while" She spoke her southern accent shining threw.

"We need to pull over for the night anyways and you can wash up and meet everyone. Carol why don't you go with her?" Rick said

walking away when carol nodded.

"Where are we driving to?" Melinda wondered out loud.

"Fort Benning, we're hoping for a safe zone."

"Hopefully there is one."

"Here are some clothes" Carol spoke as she handed a folded outfit. "They're probably too big. You need to get some meat on your

bones!" Carol lightly taped Mellie's arm, attempting to lighten the mood. The girls laughed together foe a few moments before carol

directed the filthy girl to the bathroom with some water to clean herself off, then headed out to meet everyone.

Melinda had gotten along with everyone nicely except for Shane and daryl, well she just hadn't spoken to him much as he was off in his

own area. After a night where she actually ate and drank she went to bed not scared that she might not wake up again.

That's it all of chapter one!! Please let me know of what you think, I like any kind of criticism!! JUST PLEASE

REVIEW AND READ!!!!

The next chapter (that is if you guys review) will probably be a time jump. Not that much of a time jump but just so

the group trust her fully and she is involved more. Then my friends we will have some of Mel talking to him.

This is going to be a character development story, so I'm not going to just snap my fingers and they will be together.

Sorry but it makes the story better.

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