Something's Wrong

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Main problem

after they moved to Valenzuela, Ria was experiencing a terrific situation in the house, so she thought that Something is wrong about her.

Chapter 1- Graduation Tragedy

Ria and Jane were sisters, they graduated last March 23. After the Graduation, their parent's planned to go in a mall. Ria sat down on the fornt of their car , while jane is seated at the back. 15 minutes later, shockingly, a ten wheeler truck crashed their car!!!! (my God).....thankfully they were safe but their father was not, so they brought him to hospital. In the morning, the sister's mother told them that they will move in Valenzuela from Cavite, because she will sell their house in Paranaque to have a money for the operation of their father in head.

Chapter 2- Man in the park

They now moved in the house(in Valenzuela) of their grandparents who died (in the side of their mother) . After they arrange the house. Ria went outside to smell fresh air, and feel cool wind. Suddenly, she saw a man sitting at the bench near the park, so she go after him. The man's name was Nals Rodriguez, he was 21 years old, and he's waiting for her mother to come back home. Jane saw that ria was talking to Nals, so she called Ria to have a bath and warned her to stop talking to that guy, but before Jane warned her, she asked ria if Nals asked him about going around with him, and "YES, but you called me to have a bath, so I said maybe next time,"  Ria told Jane.

Chapter 3- What she saw everynight

When Ria is about to sleep, she saw a whity figure in her door, thought it was Jane so she called, "Jane was that you, please answer!". She was terrified, when no one answered.. She was more terrified when she saw her dead grandparents.........AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, Jane please come here!!!.....Jane came and asked Ria why she was screaming, "I,I,I saw lolo and lola in the door!!.."............."Don't worry I'll be here with you to sleep". Ria was seeing them every night, until she saw jane talking to them...She was very afraid

Chapter 4- Reality of Ria's life (Episode 1)

It's morning, of April 16, Ria knows that her birthday is tomorrow, then she saw Jane wearing in black, and said "Ria stay here"..."Why??"......."Ummm I am going to someone's Burial, cause this is the last day..don't come cause you might see lolo and lola again...just always pray at night....Jane told ria. But before ria will take a bath, she saw Jane going to Nals house, "Why would she do that, she said I have to avoid talking to him but Jane, she go to Nals' house???" Ria, angrily groaned.

Finale - Reality of Ria's life (Last Episode)

Next day, Come on Ria I might show you something, Jane said. "Okay" in a low tone, with an angry mood....There are 2 important persons to me who died. First, Ria saw, RIP:NALS RODRIGUEZ       BORN: MARCH 23 1990       DIED: APRIL 16 2008.... who's Nals is that???....Ria asked shockingly.........."It's him".....Jane said....." But how"?...Ria asked.......He died waiting for his mother , he didn't eat nor drink water for 1 week, waiting for his mom.......Jane added.....the other days I told you to avoid talking to him because he wants you to come with him around................PORGATORY........Jane said... He is my bestfriend but we have a silly argument before he died so I told you to refrain talking to him and i think you saw me in Nals house yesterday...It was his Death anniversary ....... What???me??....Ria nodded...."yes"..............and this is the other special person in my life....Ria saw                                          RIP: RIA MARIE BONG      BORN: APRIL 17 1990  DIED: MARCH 23 2008..........it was you ria.. father survived the crash...he was operated perfectly but you .....you didn't.....that's why you saw lolo and lola every night they wanted you to come with them in the other life,,,,,,,,I am sorry I didn't let you go to the burial of yours because i don't wanted you to see yourself be buried.....I am sorry I lied to you.... I llove you ria and I will miss you....I'll pray for you always..............."I am thankful that even you lied you'd showed me the truth and told....I love you too....Tell mom I'll be missing her and I love you all.......................Ria saw her grandparents and hand them...........float and dissappeared.............Ria didn't gamble her family anymore because the wrong about her is her Death.............and because Jane always prayed for ria........................................................

                               THE END

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