Wonderstruck

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Sorry for the short story. It's hard for me to wright a love story when I'm not close to it. Anyway I would love to hear what you guys think of the story, I would love it if you guys gave me idea's to the story so I can make the story better with your guys help. Thank you!

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Taylor followed him into the big hall way. He led her into a big living room, she asked him,"How many rooms are in this place"? "There's 110 bedrooms, 15 bathrooms, 13 living rooms, and 5 kitchens". She sat down on a big soft couch that was a cream color, there was big windows that almost touched the ceiling, and the certain's were a see through white color. There was pictures of what it looked like people from the past, like, family members. He came and sat down on the other couch across from were she was sitting. She couldn't keep her eyes off of him, he's dark brown hair and his brownish green eyes were just glowing in the sun light. He smiled at her and said,"How did you get here"? "Well..... she said with a semi smile,"I got this perfume bottle from this old women".

"Is it a purple bottle with gold designs on it"?

"Yes".

He put his hands on his head and sighed saying under his breath,"I know who that women is".

"Who"?

"It's a lady I know, she was a good friend to my mother, she was like a grandma to me. When I was a little boy she told me that she would find a perfect young lady for me, and she wouldn't come back until she found one for me. She said that she would give the perfume bottle to a lady that she thought was right for me, so she could come to this world.

Taylor was shocked, she didn't know what to say, she didn't know what to do.

"I need to go". she said. "My Father is probably wondering were I am".

"Yes we should get you back".

He walked her back to the mirror in the forest.

He said to her,"Promise me that you will not tell anybody about this place. promise me".

"Promise". she looked at him one more time and went through the mirror.

When she went through the mirror it led her back to her room, the maid came in. "Taylor I was calling you. Didn't you hear me"? the maid asked in her soft voice.

"Umm... "No I'm sorry I didn't".

"Okay, please hurry your going to be late". The maid went out of her room and closed the door behind her.

Taylor couldn't stop thinking about him, he was in her head like super glue. She had her purple dress on with rifles at the bottom of it, she put her red lip stick on and put a little bit of blush on. Then she made her way down stairs when she was walking to her carriage. the maid said that over at the ball a young man was waiting for her.

Who could it be???

Thanks for reading please comment and what do you thinks going to happen?