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Louie's point of view

"No, babe I'm not. I swear." Yep she was wasted.

"Where are you?"

"I'm with Ava and Zayn" she said. I got in my car and drove to Zayn's. I hung up the phone.  I knocked on the door.

"Come on Evelin it's time to go." I said walking in after Ava opened the door.

"Come PAR-TAY! With us." She said smirking. Her bright blue eyes stared at me. "Please... daddy?"

She just called me daddy. That's not how she is. She's sweet and innocent.

"No... I'm sorry the party is over." She got up wearing nothing but a shirt.

"You can fuck me... please" I grabbed her by the arm and dragged her into my car. "Babe... why can't we party?"

"Because... My mum just died... that's why. She died from cancer" I said driving home. I didn't like this.

We got out of the car.

"Come on let's go. I have a present for you anyway." I said handing her my hand. I walked her into her room. "Close your eyes"

"What is it?" She asked biting her lip. 

"You have to wait" I toke a deep breath. I handed her the gift. "Open your eyes"

Her reaction was priceless. It was a skin tight, red dress. But that's not the real present. I had a piece of paper that said where it was.  "Here... you need to find the other now"

I handed her the piece of paper.

"Will you-" I cut her off.

"Will you marry me?" I asked.

"Yes! I will" she said. I put the ring on her finger. 

"Now, we have to show off that dress and that ring. Don't worry I asked Niall, he's fine with it." I said holding her hand.

"That reminds me. Can we show Niall what you got me?" She asked jumping up and down.

"Yes... but you need to get a shower first. You smell like fucking liquor. And DON'T call me daddy. EVER AGAIN!" I said.

"Ok, I won't I promise." She said giving me a kiss on the cheek.

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Ok this chapter is so much shorter than I wanted it to be.  But Louie asked Evelin to marry him. That's just the sweetest. I'm nearly halfway through my book. Yes, I did change my book. But It will be better I promise..
XxxKellyxxX

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