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Lucy's pov:
Its him... i can't believe he is right in front of me!
suddenly i heard snapping. I look up and natsu is looking at me and his face is filled with worry & concern.
"Are you ok luce?"
" yeah, I'm fine just got hit that's all." i said trying not to burst in tears from seeing him Again.
"Lucy? is that you?" a voice said and i realized he is still standing there with tears forming in his eyes. Suddenly natsu grabs the caller of his shirt
" HOW DO YOU KNOW LUCY?" Natsu shouted kinda pissed off like he wants to know if he's another enemy
"Natsu, calm down," he turns to me and ask..
"Do you know him?" and i suddenly remember all those times we were together, the good, the bad and the ones I don't want to remember...
3rd person POV:
* Flashback...
"Takehiko!! Takehiko!! Where are you?" Shouted a 5 year blond who's looking behind tree's and then...
"Boo!!!"
"AHHHHH!"
"Haha, lucy you should of seen your face it was so funny!!" The little Burnett boy laughed holding his stomach and rolling on the grass and dirt
"THAT WAS NOT FUNNY TAKEHIKO!!!" little Lucy cried
"I'm sorry lucy i didn't mean to make you cry."
"it's ok, we'll be friends forever... right?"
" yeah friends forever and ever!!"
(still flashback) 9 years later...
"Hey, lucy i was w-wondering if you would gooutwithme?"Takehiko nervously said
"huh?"
"would you go out with me?"
"YES i would love to!!!!"
(still flashback) 1 year passed...
The 15 year old girl is skipping through the halls looking for her boyfriend... she finally found him...
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KISSING ANOTHER GIRL!!!
tears threating to fall out of her eyes
"Takehiko?"
"Lucy?... LUCY ITS NOT WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE!!!"
"NEVER TALK TO ME AGAIN!!"
and they never saw each other sense then.
flashback ended...*
"takehiko?" the celestial mage ask sadly
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The ways of my heart (nalu fan fiction)
FanfictionEveryone knows about Lucy's past but what they don't know is before Lucy did once fall in love a while ago!!! What will natsu do when her Ex-boyfriend suddenly shows up to try and win her back? Along the way everyone has to fight dark magic and evil...
