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So here I have a really cute oc called Ruby. I think that she is cute but let me see what her personality is. I'll just let you know that I write this as I'm reading so...yea

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So she is eleven

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So she is eleven....ok good I was just checking if the picture had boobs. It doesn't so.... good,that really wouldn't have made sense;-; .
-reads- so she is weird, kind.....*sigh* DUM,very expressive( what ever the hell that's suppose to means),....friends with everyone....
Ok so please,PLEASE, don't make your ocs friends with everyone....just PLEASE! Do you really think there's someone that likes everyone and is liked by everyone.NO OF COURSE NOT. Especially if you said she is weird. I'm sorry but weirdos are friends with weirdos. And not everyone is a weirdo you know. But rather than that  I don't see anything that is too bad.
-reads- pet.....dinosaur....
Ok I don't want to offend the person that asked me to rate it but I WARNED THEM THAT NOT EVERY OC IS GOING TO BE GOOD AND THAT IM NOT GOING TO LIKE THEM ALL. So , unless she lives in some supernatural world( if she does you should've mentioned it) having a pet dinosaur is a little weird. Unless you see your neighbor just casually walking his pet velociraptor in the park. You see them do that? I DONT THINK SO!  So of course i never meant to hurt this person, if I did....I'm sorry.
So I'll give this oc a solid 6/10 cause of thoose two things that bothered me. So....yea. I hope the person won't yell at me ;-; ( but if they do that's fine :3 )

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