Hailey: ★★★★★
Kadria: ★★★
Jennel: ★
And now, onto the reasoning.
-Hailey-
Once I started reading, I couldn't stop. I love stories like this, and CMR (CrazyMindsRock) really captures her main character well. The story is easy to read, (no grammatical errors) and she starts with introducing us to mystery and action. The thing she could fix up is her summary. It didn't really say "come read me." But never the less, I loved it, and waiting for a new update!
~Kadria~
I agree with Hailey on many points, but I don't agree on her opening. She should've explained the world around her main character, and heightened the sensations that came with reading. But her grammar was correct, along with spelling. Maybe a better hook to her story, but other then that.
♥Jennel♥
Now for mine! I honestly didn't like CrazyMindsRock's Hunters of Priya. The story itself had not real interest for me.
Total: 9 out of 15
Not bad. Not bad. And hopefully if you're reading you will consider what's been said. But ignore Jennel. She doesn't know what she's talking about. ;)
See y'all soon.
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Wolf Queens
