Hey people that still read this book.
PLEASE READ
Recently, I've been going through a little bit of a funk (depression maybe). And looking back I've noticed that I've completely lost the story line to this book. I don't know why I decided to drag out this story line. At first, I had so many plans for this book but now I see that I've lost the focal point which is Lauren and Zayn. I thought bringing in new characters like Ophelia, James and Jessie would make things interesting, but I wish I wouldn't have done that. I should have left my book Wrong where I ended it...with a cliffhanger.
Yes, I'm going to stop writing this book. But, I will tell you what was in that infamous letter at the end of Wrong as well as all the things that you were eventually going to find out if I had continued writing this book.
The Letter.
So, at the end of Wrong you may remember the envelope that Zayn's father gave him right before Zayn brought him to his tragic end. Well, inside the envelope contained a letter that revealed the truth behind why his father never treated him with love and abused him throughout his childhood. Long story short, Mrs. Malik had an affair with another man and became pregnant (with Zayn) and died during child brith. Mr. Malik knew the child (Zayn) wasn't his, therefore, he took out his aggression towards his late wife on Zayn his entire life. In the letter, the man Zayn thought to be his father explained all this to him and apologized for resenting him for something he couldn't control.
Why Jessie rejected Ophelia.
In the last chapter I wrote in this book, Ophelia and Jessie finally have a moment in the wee hours of the morning after a loooong night at the hospital. The reason Jessie felt as if he shouldn't go any further with Ophelia is because he is confused about his sexuality. And to make matters worse, he fell for her brother after the two of them had an unexpected make out session weeks before he even knew Ophelia. Jessie's sexuality seems to be challenged when he meets Ophelia (not knowing she was James sister) and he develops a deep attraction for her spiritual because of her love for the simpler things in life. But he is deeply attached to her brother physically. So, basically, he likes Ophelia and lust for James.
How was I going to end this book?
Well, if you can't tell by now, I love dark endings. So, my plan was to have Lauren find out about the "secret affair" that was going to occur between Ophelia and Zayn. Of course someone had to died. I wanted history to repeat itself by Lauren pulling out a knife (like she did to Ivy and her mother in the first book) and ya know, stabbing Zayn to death. And remember that pocket knife James gave Ophelia when telling her she needs to protect herself? Yep, that comes in handy(she kills Lauren). Basically, Ophelia comes out victorious in all of this because she soon learns that Zayn left her half of all his wealth, including his home. The other half was left to Rachel, his daughter. So...yeah. Boom.
I hope that cleared up everything. I'm sorry for not going through with this book but honestly? It was going no where for me. I hope you guys understand.
I'M NOT DONE WRITING! Look out for a new book soon. Love you guys and thank you for alway supporting me.
-M
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(CANCELLED) Secrets Of The Father
FanfictionA continuation of my book Wrong. In which a husband slowly becomes close to his daughter's babysitter. Once comfortable with her, he begins confessing to her all his wrongdoings while creating new ones in hopes that his wife will never find out.