This is a story my friend submitted to me, it's not completed, but she would love to recieve some feedback!
Written by Kiwing. Go follow her she's adorabubble :D
This was for a competition sooooo yeah.
Hope you guys like it!
“Rrring”. That was the last bell for the day at school. I still felt confused.See, I have been having these weird dreams about some world in anotherdimension. I do not know what it is called but I have a feeling that it is real. But then again, it is just a dream.
“Hey, you feeling okay?” That was my best friend Lily. Oh yeah, I forgot to introduce myself. I am Jessie. Turning 13 in September. Okay, back to my bestfriend. She knew I was having those dreams and it was a good thing she isconcerned about me. I have been feeling really distracted when those peskydreams came. Anyway I told her that I was fine. She looked at me like she knew I was lying then shrugged and said okay. Then, she walked away.
I was alone again. I rushed out of school when I saw that I was late forlunch. My mom was preparing my favourite meal: Spaghetti Bolognaise. And I donot want to miss it. Little did I know my fate and destiny was in danger. And Iwas definitely not going to enjoy my spaghetti so soon.A Musical Box.
I was close to home. My stomach was growling madly. I could not waittill there was food in my mouth. As I was walking past the creek (my house isnear a creek), I heard some beautiful music. It was so delicate and graceful that Ihad to find the source of it. I ignored my stomach even though it was stillgrowling. I walked through the trees and past the creek. I heard the music growlouder. It was coming from the north side. I ran towards it with only the music toguide me. And finally, I found it.
I picked up the music box. It was surprisingly light and so beautiful. Itwas so perfect. I wondered who would throw such a beautiful music box which needed so much craftsmanship away. But anyway, there was a note attached toit. It was made of papyrus. I turned it around to read it. It said “BEWARE OF NERISAUDS”. I had no idea what it was but I had a feeling that note and themusic box was for me. It was not an accident it was thrown away. I stood theretrying to absorb what I had just seen. At that exact moment, a gust of wind blewpast, taking the note with it. I ran and jumped to catch it. And I did.
I felt relieved that I had caught the note. Then, I started to realizethat I was lost. I called for help but no one heard me. That was when it happened. I saw it. It was the most beautiful door I have ever seen. It hadmusical notes carved on it and a variety of other patterns. It was beautiful butthe weird thing was: it was connected to nothing. I looked all around the door. Itseemed to be enchanted and I got the feeling that all this stuff was related to mydream. But it could not be. I had nothing but my schoolbag, water, the musical box and the note. I was not ready to walk through the door but I mustered up all my ccourage and walked towards the door. I turned the knob. And my adventure began.
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