Keep holding on ( Twilight )

Chapter 1
I had just finished packing my bags and already I was putting them in the taxi to go to forks. My step dad was a minor league baseball player so he travelled around allot. My mum stayed in Phoenix with me while my step dad went travelling. After a while, my mum got depressed being away from him so I agreed to go and live with my dad in forks.
After a final hug and kiss, I got into the taxi and drove away from my home. As soon as I left the drive, I started regretting my choice. My dad was a police man and a very threatening one at that. Before I knew it I saw a sign that says " Forks. " My heart started beating at an un-ordinary pace. We pulled up at a familiar drive. I climbed out of the car, got my bags and went inside. I was greeted warmly by my dad and then some men, one in a wheel chair, one pushing him and one who looked about 16. All had long hair.
" Hi I'm Jacob. " said the boy, " we used to play together as children. Everyone of us heard that you were coming back to forks. "
His eyes glinted in the sun and his long black hair hung down to his waist.
My dad said that for lunch we were going to a cafe that we used to go to when I was little. After lunch we went home and my dad asked me if I was ready for my first day at school. Truthfully I wasn't because I'd never had many friends and I knew no one in forks and yet everyone knew me.
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