The introduction (an outsider's view)

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It is the city of Mudburn. A city as dirty as it's name, and filthy too. It smells like dead rats all the time. The sun doesn't shine upon this city of sin. Good souls cannot live a day in this city, making everyone living in the city bad without a doubt.

In Mudburn, no one lives under a roof that they can call their home. No elderly citizen does a job that earns good money. It's either dirty, or it's none. Everyone is a robber, a thief, a murderer, a drug dealer, a sinner. There's no word such as "good" or "nice" or "pleasant" in Mudburn. There's no god.

Like a pool of mud is a pool of holy water to a dirty pig, Mudburn is a heaven for all the criminals and the inferior minded. There are no rules. No cops. No need to pay taxes, no need to pay for anything at all. It's free-for-all.

But if you ever think of paying a visit to this rathole, heed my advice, DON'T! You might be well armed and not afraid of anything. But you won't come out alive to tell us your experience. Why do you think even the cops turn back from the city's borders? You can think all you want and guess all you want, but never ever become curious enough to SEE what it really looks like.

Stay away from Mudburn!

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*UPDATED 22/05/2018
I'm a school student who has 2 months left for schooling and who has a big exam on August. So I'm currently stuck in between all my work and I have absolutely no time to continue writing. But since I started this, I will end it as well. I won't be updating at all any sooner and if you started this, I hope you'd keep it in a reading list named "To be read later" because I will, definitely continue. But not yet!

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