louis tomlinson is my brother ? WAIT WHAT ???

louis Tomlinson is my brother chapter 8

( a/n sorry I noticed that there was loads of ad pellung mistakes in chapter 6 I will try and work on that I can't promise I will be the best

speller oh and I changed my mind I'm gonna put them there ages Lou is 20 zayn is 19 and the rest are 18 anyway  here is chapter 8 xx )

( louis pov )

"hi louis" Jake said like there was nothing wrong with this situation I walked over to the door and closed it then walked up to him a slammed him up against it

"listen here I want you to break up with my little sister otherwise it will be something else that ends up broken" he looked at me like he had seen a ghost at to be honest I don't give if we are - sorry excuse my French if we were friends he is dating my 11 year old sister and I won't stop until they are broken up

" louis what the actual hell I havent done anything wrong why the hell are you acting like this" is this guy blind or something he is going with my sister and not to mention the 4 year gap and he Isnt doing something wring well he needs a check up on his brain

"what your doing wrong is going out with my little sister" he just sighs and pushes me of him and walks downstairs I follow him I walk into the sitting room and see dani even though she knows and can tell this is a privite chat she just stays and looks a little bit amused there is no doubt in my mind that she will be contributing to our 'chat' he sits down and starts

( Jake's pov )

I start cause its a little obvious that fizzybear only told him that we go out "well louis I asked you a few months ago and I'll quote 'what would you do if you loved someone and wanted to be with them even if its just not right ' didn't I " he nodded "well that's practically it I really asked for your blessing without asking you straight up " he looked in deep thought for a moment but then spoke up " yeah but Jake what made you want to go out with fizzy and I swear down if its a lame answer I will chuck you out in the blink if an eye " I wanted to tell him but I just couldn't I promised fizzy  I wouldn't I had a face on me that said ' ask fizzypop ' but he didn't get it luckily fizzys sister did "ask your sister" she said like it was the most obvious thing on the planet I like her she's real funny but doesn't even compair to my fiz except the looks cause you know there twins but they look so alike its scary but I did notice when I found out they were twins that fiz's sister was shorter and alot thin and fiz is thin which isn't good for fiz's sister ok I'm talking in my mind and and I'm getting annoyed by calling her 'fiz's sister ' I was about to ask her name but louis chose to talk

"no I want you to tell me " he looked worried but also upset it was probably at the fact I never told him about her " I promised her I wouldnt tell anyone so I really don't want to tell you and lose her trust " he looked understanding but stood up and went up stairs

( louis pov )

I need to say sorry and ask her How they became a couple but mainly to say sorry I walked up the stairs and turn into the direction I need to go in and walk to her room once I reach her room I hear quiet sobs that makes me open the door quicker and I noticed she is still sleeping but not very comfortably

she's sobbing and turning and then what she says next breaks my heart "I hate you louis " then she shoots up like a rocket she looks ok except the tear stained face and then she turns around just to meet my eyes I see fear and hatred but she soon looks away and then runs to a corner of the room it kinda looks like shes trying to squish herself into the wall to never return its actually really cute I would laugh but isn't really the right time for laughing "fiz I'm so so sorry I should never have said that it was stupid and immature of me just please please forgive me I love you so so much and I could never ask for a better sister" she stands up and does the unexpected she hugs me after all I said and did she hugs me I hug her back and we start crying with each other then I hear applause from behind I turn around and see the boys

wow they got up this early I'm so shocked

and I see Jake and dani they all stop when they see my face has gone serious I then say "please can yous get out I need to speak to Jake dani and fizzy" they do what I wished fit  and sciddadle out dani and fiz look confused I should probably start talking

"well fiz I asked Jake How you guys go out and he didn't tell me so I want you to tell me now" I probably had a really stern look on my face then Jake looked really uncofurtable

"I can't listen to this again louis Sorry" and on that note he walked out I looked at fiz who looked like she was jezzing her pants then she started

"well I-I- I was w-w-w-alking d-down the street a-and then-n I heard a n-no-oi-s-s-e in the alley so I w-        went and checked-d it out  then-n I saw a gang t-t-h-hee-y said to me t-h-hhey could make me-e-e feel ggg-oo-oo-dd-d just l-like old t-i-mmes I didn't k-n-ow him but h-i-ss friend s-ays his n-a-me for so-mething and I w-as scared but I wal-lk-ked a-w-w-way so t-t-th-hey pinned me a-g-g-g-g-gainst t-th-hheeee wall and started pullng my t-tr-rousers down andd-d started kissing myy-y neck I told them to sss-ttoooo-pp but they went far and he waaa-ss about too do it but-t-t-t Jake s-s-t-tto-oop-p-p-e-ee-d-d-d him"I was full on sobbing I wanted to punch the wall

so I did so and punch after punch after punch I just couldnt stop until dani shouted through her cries and quiet sobs

"stop you making her cry" and right enough she was crying so I ran to her and hugged her like no tomorrow I can't belive it when I find out who done it there gonna wish they where never born "do you know who done it baby girl" she nodded "Connor Ryan's" and I felt dani freeze underneath me I ignored it but bad idea she started trembling with fear and asked in a shaky voice

( dani's pov )

" does me and fiz look alike louis " I asked in a trembling shaky voice dreding the answer cause I kind of all ready the what I'm gonna hear

" yes alot " 

The person who raped me mistakend

my sister for me so was about to rape her

the last thing I heard was "dani what's wrong"

I passed out