I've uploaded a rewritten version of Attraction to get some feedback on the story. Because I still have some problems, I've not uploaded all of it, but hopefully I will work on it here. I want to hear your thoughts and what you think works and what doesn't work. Go all out, comment as much as you want. If you see a typo, catch it. If you see a weird sentence, mark it. If you think I screwed up massively, don't be afraid to tell me. This is the last chance to have a true impact on the final version of the novel.
Lots of love, Avy
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RomanceJoachim, the Swedish guy who refuses to grow up, meets his American opposite. Tom, the guy who had to grow up too fast, finds little amusement in the blond whirlwind who takes life for granted. Thrown together in holy matrimony, as Joachim forget...
