PART-1

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Here is the first part of my first ever FS. I am quite excited about this story. Hope you all will enjoy it. At the end please do share you opinions.

MANAN FS - DIL KI BAAT

PART-1

In a temple we can see a boy sitting under a big tree. His condition is vulnerable. He is looking like he lost all the interest of living. His dark chocolate brown eyes shows nothing but pain. His eyes were red as if he had cried for a long time.

 His eyes were red as if he had cried for a long time

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(Ignore the back scenario)

He was sitting there idle from last night. He not even for once moved from there. After the prayer the priest of the temple looked at him and sighed sadly looking at his condition. He went towards the boy.

P: Manik beta you didn't have anything from last night. You will also fell sick like this. Please come in with me and have something. Don't keep sitting like this.

So the boy is Manik.

Hearing the priest Manik just for once took glance of him but didn't move an inch. He kept sitting there looking at nowhere.

The priest again sighed as he knew it was no use of telling him anything. Since last 3 years he comes here almost every day and sits here like this. As if asking something to God. He feels bad for Manik but didn't know how to console him.

Then the priest went inside a room where a girl of mid 30 was saying his prayer.

Then the priest went inside a room where a girl of mid 30 was saying his prayer

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P: Navya beti please go out. Manik has come again today. He is sitting out from last night in that position only. Give him something to eat.

Don't know what has happened to him. What's going on in his heart and mind. He is such a big person but don't know why is he behaving like this.

Nav: okay, Baba, I will go and give him the food. You had some work out today, right? You go there, I will take care of this side else you will get late.

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