Love me, but nearly killed me

{ Justice Mariee}

im in class reading a history book until someone slammed the door open and walked in guess who, it was my worse nightmare Gabriel Torres he bothers me everyday.He hits me makes me do his homework; things like that.But all the girls love him.They say he is sexy, smart and all the teachers love him too.My bestfriend Mia loves him aslo -,- Ok I can say I love his small little afro with his little blavk curlys popping out of his head and his plump lips and the way he dresses is cute but everything else I dont like thats what I dont see what the other girls see.Oh eait theres one thing Im forgetting to tell you all the girls hat he went out with sucked his manhood but im that girl that wont do that

Gabriel:wassup ma

Justice:what the fuck do you want

Gabriel:watch your tone with me you know I dont play that with you

Justice:leave me thr fuck alone Gabriel

Gabriel:awww I love the way you say my name baby

Justice:(mumbles) baby? when did he ever call me baby

Gabriel:so you going o do my homework bitch

Justice:no the fuck you think this is a factor or some shit

Gabriel:your playing with me again

Justice:no the fuck im not (standing up)

Gabriel:(stands up) yes you are (walking towards her)

Justice:fuck you (walking away)

Gabriel:get your ass over here (blocking her way)

Justice:WHAT!!!?

Gabriel:(slaps her ) dont you what me!

then leans closer in justice face and whispers yo do what I ask ok little girl

Justice hold her face and looks away from Gabriel trying to hold back her tears that were forming in her eyes

Gabriel:ok little ma you can go

trys to kiss Justice on the cheeck but she runs out the classroom and into the bathroom............

what do you think of the first part?