Short Scary Stories

The Hook (my version)

A teenage boy drove his date to a dark and deserted Lovers' Lane for a make-out session. He turned on the radio for mood music, leaned over to whisper in the girl's ear, and began kissing her.

A short while later, the music suddenly stopped mid-song. After a moment of silence an announcer's voice came on, warning in an ominous tone that a convicted murderer had just escaped from the state insane asylum — which happened to be located within a half-mile of Lovers' Lane — and urging that anyone who notices a man wearing a stainless steel hook in place of his missing right hand should immediately report his whereabouts to the police.

The girl became frightened and asked to be taken home. The boy, feeling bold, locked all the doors instead and, assuring his date they would be safe, attempted to kiss her again. She became frantic and pushed him away, insisting that they leave. Relenting, the boy peevishly jerked the car into gear and spun its wheels as he pulled out of the parking space.

When they arrived at the girl's house she got out of the car, and, reaching to close the door, began to scream uncontrollably. The boy ran to her side to see what was wrong and there, dangling from the door handle, was a bloody hook.

She begged the boy to call the police, but he wanted to looked brave and snatched the key out of her hand, he pushed the key in the lock and it creaked open. They walked through and walked into the living room. Hanging from the cieling fan was her parents' severed heads, they saw blood trailing from behing them. They turned around and a peircing sound came from the TV. Suddenly tw words came up. You're Next. They felt breath down their necks and heard a faint whisper..."Goodbye..."