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TOMS POV

so we had been to McDonald's and there was no space to sit in there so i am taking her somewhere were i always go i love it there and i m hoping she will to.

"tom were are we going"she asked with her voice so perfect.

"just trust me"

"can you give me a clue" she said

" no because we are here"

she turned her head and gasped. "oh my god tom its beautiful"

i was going to take a big risk here but the words just blurted out my mouth.

"like you then"

she turned her head fast and gave me a strange look and then i just thought. "crap tom you just messed up any chance you had with her, why did i have to be so stupid".

"really" she asked

" yeah, really".

there was a pause, she looked puzzled.

so i asked "why has no one ever told you that before".

"no never" she said hanging her head kicking her feet at the floor.

i was quite shocked at her response.i lifted her chin up and said "well the should because you are the most beautiful girl i have ever seen"

she smiled her beautiful smile sat down and we ate our McDonald's i smiled to my self and sat down with her.

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