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Ch1.

I need to fix it but enjoy what I have for now  

It was cold outside, no one was out except for the dogs playing in the white snow. I could hear them bark in excitement as I turned the corner of the street. My father Stoick the major of the town had made me go in search of herbs for our aunt Gothi, since she too old to go out and get them herself and your father is too busy all the time. So I am forced to go out in the cold and to hunt down the herbs in the woods. "Great" you wonder to yourself with annoyance "how long will this take?" You walk down the block to the edge of where the land slopes down, making the town look like it's on a small land pedestal 4 feet high. The grass wasn't covered with snow but was slippery with ice so it didn't take that much effort to get down. I skid down, which is one of my favorite things to do in the winter. Well, not only winter, it's cold all the time in the town of berk but only in the winter is when it snows. It's going to be a pain to get back up, I can feel it already. I walk down to a little river that's iced over, jumping over it as I make my ways into the woods. I spend at least 30 minutes before I found everything I needed putting it in my bag as I found them. I started to get really cold all of the sudden and that's saying something, considering I'm wearing my brown fur coat with my green beanie I got last Christmas so, I'm normally warm in this. But something wrong, I could feel the cold air on my neck go down my spine giving my whole body goose bumps. I felt my heart in my throat racing as I sense another presence, I wasn't the only one here even though I didn't see anyone. "Hey there!" I heard a macular voice behind me causing me to jump as I turned. But no one was there and I could have sworn that the voice came right behind me. "What brings you here little one ?" the voice spoke again behind me. I turned around again to find out no one was there yet again. I started getting scared, I felt my legs starting to shake and I tried my best to sound like I wasn't afraid "What do you want? Where are you?" But I failed miserably. "Haha, trying to be brave I see, well that's not going to help you," He said with an evil chuckle. I looked at the ground to find a black blob on the ground I've never seen this before, so I stepped on it curiously. Then out of nowhere, a hand came from the blob, launching on to my prosthetic foot that's cover by my boot and started dragging me to a hole that was 5 feet from where I was. I streaked in fear then quickly regain my composure. "Think hiccup think how do I get out of this?" I told myself when it hit me. My prosthetic leg has a latch that I could unhook, that we free me from his tight grip. Which I did, now free I ran, ran for dear life. I felt my lungs burn as I ran, my feet wanting to give out under me and my mind beginning to go white but I kept running as fast as I could. It has been 10 minutes of running non-stop when I made it to the river all the same time the voice just keep staying behind me " You can't run away from your fear hiccup, you know what you did and the world's going to hate you for that." The shadow said sounding like he was smirking. I tense missing my footing making me miss the jump over the river, this forced me to slip on the ice. "how does he know, I'm domed " was the last thing I though before I hit my head on the ice and everything went black.